Well done on meeting the deadline Chloe. You have certainly developed your design skills, especially using photoshop and the beginnings of InDesign. The fc shows that you do understand the conventions of using type and image together. The image is of good quality and has been positioned thoughtfully on the page. I do like the sans serif masthead but I think it would be better placed either behind the model's head or drop the image down so that it is above her head. You have chosen readable and clear fonts for the coverlines - they could possibly be slightly larger size, and spacing between the first coverline and its information should be closer. Like on the second coverline. However, for a first fc you have shown a confident and competent understanding of how elements work together but also how it needs to reflect the target audience. Thank you.
Well done on meeting the deadline Chloe. You have certainly developed your design skills, especially using photoshop and the beginnings of InDesign.
ReplyDeleteThe fc shows that you do understand the conventions of using type and image together. The image is of good quality and has been positioned thoughtfully on the page. I do like the sans serif masthead but I think it would be better placed either behind the model's head or drop the image down so that it is above her head.
You have chosen readable and clear fonts for the coverlines - they could possibly be slightly larger size, and spacing between the first coverline and its information should be closer. Like on the second coverline. However, for a first fc you have shown a confident and competent understanding of how elements work together but also how it needs to reflect the target audience. Thank you.